Something about the writing in the beginning feels really forced. I don't know if it actually is that way or if it just seemed that way to me when I read it because I was feeling ornery. But still. It seemed forced, so maybe that says something. Also, the comma after the "But" in the first paragraph...
I usually avoid books with kids in them because they're really not for me. But this one sounded kind of interesting, so I went into it with an open mind, and I have to say, I was impressed. The kids didn't annoy me and I actually found them really cute in this. My only complaint with this is the pac...
I really loved it, it was amazing and very beautifully written and can't wait to read the next one!
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