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by S.H. Allan
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Reader's Discretion Advised
Reader's Discretion Advised rated it 11 years ago
There was melodrama mixed with info-dump, which made the story come off as rather stilted. The flashbacks were a bit better because they settled into the narrative, but flashbacks are really clunky ways of telling a story unless the flashbacks are the point, like in Memento. Oh, and the "Now" sectio...
Sandra
Sandra rated it 11 years ago
Offered for FREE from the M/M Romance Group's Love Has No Boundaries event. Thank you too all the amazing authors who participated!What can I say? I'm just a big grouch and too much gushing doesn't work for me. There were definitely moments that had me tearing up (Nigel's 'swing low, sweet chario...
MLE's Porn and Ponies
MLE's Porn and Ponies rated it 11 years ago
Really well done. Powerful, and emotionally honest this story was really well developed. The characters were complex, and interesting. One of the better LHNB stories of the year.
jilrene reads
jilrene reads rated it 11 years ago
Wonderful, sad, heartbreaking, uplifting, beautiful. This is the story of Derrick and Nigel, told in alternating POVs both present and past. An interesting way to present this story and it worked so well. There are only a few additional characters that get more than a couple lines. The most importan...
Romances and more...
Romances and more... rated it 11 years ago
3.5 stars. The writing style in the present tense took a bit of adjusting to. I didn't care for it, but then the story took hold. Good story.
jules0623
jules0623 rated it 11 years ago
3.5 stars.
Sandra @ My Fiction Nook
Sandra @ My Fiction Nook rated it 11 years ago
http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/1426979-closure-by-s-h-allan-nsfw-7-28-download-link-insideNo words. None which would be sufficient to do this story justice. I laughed, I cried. The author created two amazing characters, set in a story that will stay with me for a very long time.Free from the M/...
Affairs of M/Men
Affairs of M/Men rated it 11 years ago
So this is mine folks, written under a pen name. I wasn't going to tell anyone, but only a couple of my friends have read it, and it's killing me not to know what you all think. So if it sounds at all interesting to you, if you like stories about gay men, I would really like it if you read it and ga...
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