I thought something extremely bad happened to them too, but overall it was a nice read.
It had suspense. I remember thinking 'what the hell happened to them?', plus the way it was written past - future was really adding to the suspense
Indeed. But what annoyed me a little bit was the enormous long time it took Daniel to tell the story, as he is so slow he doesn't get to tell the story in time...
It had suspense. I remember thinking 'what the hell happened to them?', plus the way it was written past - future was really adding to the suspense