Comments: 23
BrokenTune 9 years ago
Oh, dear. Please keep the updates coming on this one. It sounds like I should go and make pop corn.
This one sounds like it will be one of the most hilarious things I've read, but was obviously also not meant to be that hilarious.
BrokenTune 9 years ago
But these kind of train wrecks are sometimes the best!
They really are!
I'll make some popcorn - I have it handy because it's basketball season.
I'm three ways torn: DD, this, or blindness project paperback books? I'm looking forward The Arrangement, which I purchased. Thank you for the recommendation :D
Hope you like it better than some of the others in the Blindness Project!
Well, it can't be as bad as Blind School. Or Clarity. One wold hope.

Hell, it probably'll even be better than Blind!
No, but you keep nailing it. Windows? Loving it even more than Night Walk.
I think it's part of what I'm looking for, though. So far, it's more detail about what it's like to be blind, and based on me admittedly short experiment, this feels more realistic to me.

Nothing much has happened action wise, but I'm really enjoying the portrayal of blindness.
Abandoned by user 9 years ago
Oh, dear!
It was free, so of course, I downloaded. I have to see how this plays out now...
so... i don't know a whole lot medically... but how was she born with a scar?
I'm assuming that in a world where one can have been born in one eye that medical accuracy is either a moot point, or vastly different from what we would consider medical accuracy.

Y'know, I love typos for their comedic value...
Batgrl: Bookish Hooha 9 years ago
After I was born in one eye it took me years to escape.
Then I got stuck in the other one. Dammit.
(I must now go read all your posts on this! Heh!)
There's only this one so far. I'm knee deep in Daredevil comics right now :D
Olga Godim 9 years ago
Sounds like written by someone whose English is a second language, like she was translating herself. From what language, I'm not sure, but there are several grammar mistakes in that one phrase of description. Too many even for a self-pub author.
Oddly enough, the book itself is okay as far as the writing goes. Nothing as glaringly wrong as in the description.

It was just boring as all get out, so I ended up reading something else that is horribly bad on a couple different levels.

Which is why I write snarky reviews. If authors aren't going to respect me, or my time, enough to write with accuracy, then why would I hold back when I review?
Olga Godim 9 years ago
I'm 100% behind you on your snarky attitude. Keep going.
I should have been worried about the book I'm reading now.

I am going to unleash the Kraken on that one, because I wanted it to be good.
Oooh. ::goes to make popcorn::