You would have to be in an extremely charitable mood regarding editing to get through the first book in this series, Tuesday's Child. This second book is a little more tolerable. I just couldn't stop noticing all the rest of the typos, misplaced punctuation marks, and such after the first one appeared. The overuse of commas DID bother me. And the author seems to be quite overly fond of ellipses.

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my somewhat of a review, by the way!