i liked your blog but you didn't really add a lot of detail and it didn't really made scenes.

I like how you told us what you thought about the book, but i think you need to add more details.

Your blog was good, but it didn't really go into detail about what Francisco wanted people to learn.

i disagree how you explain panchito's life . and do not think he wants lear of an immigrant life and need more details

Your blog is good, but there is some errors if you fixed those errors this would be a better blog.