Comments: 4
Moonlight Reader 4 years ago
The dialogue is awful. No one talks like that.
Linda Hilton 4 years ago
Ugh, you're right. Honestly, I hadn't got past the clunky description of the village. The dialogue is worse.
Grimlock ♥ Inhumans 4 years ago
Agreed. I read some of the dialogue, and it was the most stilted stuff I've ever read. Isn't this someone who was bitching about her reviews, too?
Sometimes you dont like a book,but you think the author is cool and sometimes you like their books but the author is an awful person.

And sometimes its both. :/ umm Thats some behavior.