Comments: 3
The Butler Did It 9 years ago
The flaws that you point out seem like they are obvious enough that someone should have caught them somewhere in the publishing process and they wouldn't have been that difficult to change. These kinds of things baffle me from experienced, professional writers.
Lyssa's novel ideas 9 years ago
I really enjoyed the first one and have this in the pile (can't wait to read it). I still have to read Hero's Journey first, did you read that one?
Murder by Death 9 years ago
Yes, I did. I gave it three stars; it felt like the authors were in a rush to put it together and they tried to cram too much information about some of the characters in, but it was a cute story.