Comments: 6
Tannat 1 year ago
Maybe you just missed the nautical references in those 3 sentences?
Darth Pony 1 year ago
Probably, though I scrutinized them from every angle. ;)

"She smelled like cream and incense. Her arms were cool. She was crying too."

Literally the only three sentences in the eight-sentence paragraph that didn't carry through on the theme.
Tannat 1 year ago
Crying is salt water though... >.>
Darth Pony 1 year ago
LOL Good point. I'm still stuck on cream and incense, though.
BrokenTune 1 year ago
No sentence is truly complete without a reference to sea turtles. ;)
Darth Pony 1 year ago
Sadly, everything from the greatest of literature to my own inadequate scribbling is rife with incomplete sentences! (And this has highly amused me, so probably for the next few days I'll be mentally finishing every sentence with "something, something, sea turtles." ;)