Comments: 3
Familiar Diversions 7 years ago
I got through a few pages of the Amazon "look inside" sample before I started clicking through to see if Coach had a lot of dialogue. A half page or more of all caps text would be both painful to read and unintentionally hilarious.
Batgrl: Bookish Hooha 7 years ago
Wow, one character *only* speaks in all caps? Yeah, that would annoy me.

Also I played multiple sports in high school, and injured my hamstring - and none of the coaches or doctor ever used the word "hammies." I have heard children call hamsters hammies though, so using that word would get a giggle from me.
Degrees of Affection 7 years ago
Thank you. I've seen several posts about this book but knew you'd show the real issues with it in a way I could clearly understand. The need for editing has me leaning toward Do Not Read...but all caps?! Nope. I use them probably more then I should but that would annoy me to the point of not finishing. Hope your other reading is going well.