Cute story. After a bit of a slow start, I was really enjoying the building friendship between Mark and Jimmy. It was nice to see Mark take the mature route and back off when he actually met his crush. Looking forward to seeing where this leads.
Sweet story, but just way too short to really get the feel for the relationship between Mark and Jimmy.It sort of developed off page, so the change in their feelings was a bit of a surprise. And an epilogue or another short chapter to show how things progressed would have been great!