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First Lessons (A Medieval Tale #1) - Community Reviews back

by Lina J. Potter
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The better to see you, my dear
The better to see you, my dear rated it 7 months ago
It reads like one of those ambitious, great-ideas fanfictions written by a painfully young person. Acceptable grammar, cool premise, needs serious editing. This is, at best, a first rough draft, and it is a real pity that it was published as is. There are other issues (Mary Sue, general shallownes...
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