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by Josh Lanyon
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idamus
idamus rated it 7 years ago
Sweet, but too short
Tami
Tami rated it 7 years ago
A very short and sweet story about a young writer who thinks he has a heart attack. In the aftermath he discovers a glimpse of possibility with the doctor who takes care of him. Very well written short story, that I probably appreciate doubly after all the bad christmas novellas I read for a challen...
Trix
Trix rated it 7 years ago
That was a sweet short story.I felt bad for Ford, so young and naive, so easily perturbed. His personality and behavior screamed for someone to come rescue him, protect him from all the bad things in the world. I'm glad Jacob didn't turn out to be some kind of murderer but rather a caring doctor (an...
Mandy, I read obsessively
Mandy, I read obsessively rated it 7 years ago
3.5*This is a very short story, it starts with Ford in the ER being examined by Dr Jacob Hoyle.Ford thinks he is having a heart attack , the Dr examines him and asks all kinds of questions, that's how we get to know Ford, his age, his family and financial situation, his fear, and it is also told fro...
blub
blub rated it 7 years ago
A good short read although a bit too short. Ford was easy to relate to and Jacob was the kind of character everyone wished they could have just come swoop in and make everything better. An encouraging story about taking chances.Love the cover. It's really cute and suitable to the story.
Ami's Hoard
Ami's Hoard rated it 7 years ago
Even if the story is only about 5000 words, Josh Lanyon is able to write something quite thoughtful. Here's Ford, only twenty-three years old, suffering from what he thought as heart attack. But as Ford talks to the emergency doctor who treats him, we find out that there are quite a lot of things ha...
Cronic Bookaholic
Cronic Bookaholic rated it 7 years ago
It's a sweet albeit too short story. Maybe Mr. Lanyon should consider using this as prequel or something. There's definitely romance (or lust?) developing bewteen Ford and Jacob!
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