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Inside the Fire - Community Reviews back

by R.M. Grace
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Coffee2words
Coffee2words rated it 10 years ago
DNF @ 3%!1% - a lot of passive sentences, weird imagery and sentence structure. ...timidly flickers he them open (transpose flickers and he)I read for an hour, 2% in and I'm developing a tick from the weird way sentences are structured. It reads really wrong.Examples from Chapter 1 - 2% in:1. ...his...
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