I rarely, if ever, have issues with writing styles but I just could not get into this. It was weirdly detailed and a major case of "tell don't show".
Meh. Boy meets older brothers friend. Boy wants to screw older brothers friend. Friend wants to date boy. Bad banter ensues. I love friends to lovers stories or brothers' friend to lover as the case may be, and I've read a lot of really great ones that made me laugh and cry and everything in be...
3.5-4*I haven't read any other stories set in Palmer, so it took me a few pages to get into the story since there are a lot of names and family relationships to keep straight.Once I got into it, it was a nice story.