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review 2014-09-04 20:07
Broken Windows by Saritadreaming
Broken Windows - Saritadreaming

Bella, who dreams of being a writer, is invited by the prestigious Masen Foundation to live on their island for one month and finish a manuscript she has been working on.  While there, Bella is reminded of the boy from her past that obviously hated her, but provoked feelings in her that no one else has.  Will Bella be able to let go of this obsession for Edward Cullen once and for all? 


First of all, I HATE giving bad reviews for fanfiction. I don’t want to hurt the author’s feelings, which seems a little silly since I’m not opposed to giving one for a published book.  This story could have been amazing; the idea is a great one.  However, Broken Windows drove me insane.  I didn’t know when I started that this was originally a one-shot that she decided to continue.  I think it should have been left alone after the original ending. The story is nothing but fluff, which isn’t a bad thing if that’s what someone is looking for, but it just goes on forever.  And there is a lot of repetition, retelling the same things over and over.  And if Edward called Bella Angel one more time I thought I would rip my hair out.  I am so disappointed. I have scanned and skipped over at least a third of it, because I can’t really stand not knowing the ending. 


Any suggestions for a good Vampward fic?  I usually stick with stories written in the first person narrative.  I’d love recommendations for lesser known stories!  

Source: www.fanfiction.net/s/6612260/1/Broken-Windows
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