Forever bickering leads
This was a great story for the most part, but the always battling leads got to me. There were a lot of great new elements to shifter myth, wish the Kings were explored more.
Gabby is so itchy to Zane, I have no idea why he kept trying. I anticipate tons of angry sex in their future. I will give it t o the author for delivering on some grumpy bears.
The smexy scene was hot but not nearly enough bedroom time throughout the book to really classify it as erotic.
The story is much longer than it needs to be, many parts could easily be cut down. There are also a lot of loose threads at the end. Too much time spent on brooding and not enough giving details on the war between clans.
This could have been a really great read if there were more show and less tell in the story. I do hope to see a sequel with her sister or perhaps a certain bachelor Alpha!