Should really just have given it 2 stars because apparently some books are just too good to go through a proper editing.
Arielle is all of a sudden Ariel.
Bear hands? 
Beginning of book he is clearly in his fathers house... ending of book he's talking like he hadn't been there since he left at 17. You would think they'd redecorated what now? 

It's getting 3 because it's a good plot and good characters. It could just have used a major overhaul and more development.

What instead of that.

Than instead of then.

Hallow instead of hollow. (More than once.)

Strange instead of stage.

Sentences with words that had no business being there.

Sentences with missing words all together.

I truly cannot believe that this was edited or proofread at all. 

I did enjoy the characters. Despite the cliche storyline and things I saw coming a mile away, I enjoyed reading it.

It's stuck on a 3 rating because I cannot forgive sloppy writing. And unedited work.