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review 2017-09-02 00:00
Sassy Ever After: Check Mate (Kindle Worlds Novella)
Sassy Ever After: Check Mate (Kindle Worlds Novella) - Sheri Lyn There are so many problems with this book that I could write a 500-page essay on it, but in a nut shell:
The writing style resembles that of an pre-teen !!!
Unbelievably immature characters!
Many of Rook's character treats and behavior patterns, if we presume that he is not suffering from any mental disorder, are from a psychological point of view impossible
Illogical with in the parameters of the story itself
The author constantly contradicts herself
Lack of artistic unity
massive plot holes
Editing problems
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review 2017-03-20 11:03
REVIEW BY MERISSA- Sassy Ever After: Check Mate (Kindle Worlds Novella) by Sheri Lyn
Sassy Ever After: Check Mate (Kindle Worlds Novella) - Sheri Lyn
Check Mate is the first book in the Kindle Worlds Novella (Sassy Ever After) that I have read, although it is not my first foray into the writing of Sheri Lyn.
Rook meets the new sheriff, and knows at first sniff, that he has also just met his mate. West knows that shifters are around, but still finds himself at a loss where Rook is concerned at times. The banter back and forth with these two is quite simply superb, especially when you factor in the townfolk's reactions to Rook's behaviour. This is an action packed novella, with murder, demons, a High Priestess, tigers, wolves... I could go on. Instead, I will just say that it would be better if you treated yourself, and read it for yourself.
As with all books by Sheri Lyn, this one is exceptionally written, with no editing or grammatical errors to disrupt the reading flow. There is lots of sass and wit to keep you smiling, with sexual tension by the bucket load. The only reason that this is a 4-star review is because, like with most novellas, I find them to be a bit rushed. For this reason, I prefer full length novels, but I will happily read anything and everything by Sheri Lyn. Most definitely recommended by me.
* A copy of this book was provided to me with no requirements for a review. I voluntarily read this book, and my comments here are my honest opinion. *
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review 2015-10-25 15:16
Finally finished this...
Check Mate - Michelle Knight

First of all, I was gifted this book by the author, but not even in exchange for a review.  She didn't ask anything of me, and I never promised anything, much less a positive review.   But, yes, full disclosure: I know her and am friendly with her on BL.  


This took me a while to read for, well, one reason: I had known what would happen at the end, and was dreading finishing for being spoiled.   I was right, it was pretty heartbreaking for me, but it was because I had come to care for one particular character.   Which is impressive: it was a robot that didn't talk, and didn't have a strong personality, but I still really liked it as the story went along.  


There was a lot to like about this book.   The humans did have strong personalities, the humor was quirky, the action barreled along quickly, and the way the robot was built seemed pretty well grounded in reality.    


That being said, there were a couple minor issue I noticed popped up multiple times, although I also know that one might be cultural differences here.   There were times when the punctuation seemed odd, but it was also consistent.   (It drives me crazy when it's not consistent, and I've come to assume consistent may mean differences depending on where one lives.)   If this is a deal breaker for people, though, I figure I'd warn them.   


There were a couple occasions where the grammar was funky enough - missing apostrophes, for example - that I believed it simply needed one more quick going through .   This is one of the rare cases where it was obviously edited, and so it didn't bug me enough to really knock down stars, but I did knock down one half a star.   The thing that clinched it for me was on pages 106 and 107: Hawkeye shoots and then there's a mention of Duds. 


"The robot knew the precise location of Duds the moment he fired, so it simply turned to face the church, opened its rocket rack and fired at Hawkeye."


This was the only moment something this large was overlooked, however.   It's rare that I get into a story or care enough about characters to not let this irk me more, but I've also been told I'm overzealous in my grammar fixes and noticing such inconsistencies by some people.   One more quick go-through would have elevated this up to four and a half-stars. 


That one last half star?   That, my friends, is a losing battle.   It had to happen this way, it had to end this way, but there were so, so many tears.   Sometimes it just has to happen that way, but it really bummed me out.   



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text 2015-10-23 01:19
Reading progress update: I've read 142 out of 164 pages.
Check Mate - Michelle Knight

"While Jefferson and Hawkeye were still locked eye to eye, via the bulge of Hakweye's manhood..."


Is it just me, or does this sound dirty?   


Also, ugh, I wanted to finish so much more of this, but my head hurts, and nothing is helping.   It's not a migraine, just a minor ache, but I may try to sleep it off. 

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text 2015-10-22 20:55
Reading progress update: I've read 96 out of 164 pages.
Check Mate - Michelle Knight

Ugh.   The meat in this book sucks.  Why?   Why are you all planning on hurting  my boy?   I'd actually be cool chilling with you guys, if you weren't planning on killing a robot. 


So many conflicted feels. 

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