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url 2017-12-27 18:17
FREEBIE: "Dominus" (Dominus, #1) by JP Kenwood

 

~ Currently FREE on Amazon. ~

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url 2017-12-25 16:34
Free Kindle Editions (headed down the black hole of amazon freebies ...)
Requiem's Song - Daniel Arenson
Pride and Precipitation (Chick Flick Clique Romantic Comedy Novella #1) - Heather Horrocks
Legions of Orion - Michael G. Thomas
Moth - Daniel Arenson
Ouroboros - Odette C. Bell
Immortal Vegas Series Box Set Volume 1: Books 0-3 - Jenn Stark
Seer of Souls (The Spirit Shield Saga Book 1) - Susan Faw
A Lying Witch - Odette C. Bell
Sora's Quest - T.L. Shreffler
Forbidden The Stars - Valmore Daniels

Heck of a thread over in one of my goodreads groups (Serious Overload of Series) with some freebies.

 

'Tis the day for internet browsing ... warn me if you see me shelving something you know is awful or is by one of those authors who interact weirdly/negatively with reviews.

 

*sigh* the turkey is cooking in the oven and starting to make the house smell so appetizing -- but it takes so long ...

Source: www.goodreads.com/topic/show/449475-book-freebies-kindle-nook-author-pub-other?page=169
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review 2017-12-20 16:11
Not my usual fare
The Butterflies - Kimberley Waldron

To tell the truth, I don't know why I downloaded this.  It was on Booksy's free list this morning.  Psychological thrillers aren't usually my cup of tea.

 

A 1994 Buick Regal with one broken headlight and a half-rusted chassis rocketed between the concrete barricades to the side entrance of Garrett County Hospital, slipped into a space near the door, and screeched to a halt.

Waldron, Kimberley. The Butterflies (p. 1). Vellichor Press. Kindle Edition.

 

 

Let's start with that publisher.  Vellichor Press has no website, no internet presence.  That tends to diminish credibility.

 

This opening sentence is all screwy.  First of all, the chassis is the frame, the underlying structure, not the body.  It's unlikely, therefore, that an ordinary observer would be able to tell if that part of the vehicle was half-rusted.  So here I am with not even a full sentence read and I'm questioning the writer's ability to use the right words.

 

Before the end of that sentence, this vehicle rockets (fast) between concrete barricades, slips (slower) into a parking space, then screeches (fast) to a stop.  Nope, it doesn't make sense.  Where are the barricades relative to the door? Does the vehicle have to turn at all?

 

I'm tired of bad writing.  When the very first sentence is fucked up, why should I read any further?

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review 2017-12-20 14:43
Disspiriting (edited to add . . . things)
Ghost of a Chance (Maggie Mulgrew Mysteries Book 1) - Cate Dean

 

 

The second Maggie Mulgrew stepped out her front door, she knew it would be a wild hair day.

 

Wind blew off the English Channel, cold and crisp—and it played havoc with her already unmanageable red waves. Like everything else in her adopted village of Holmestead, she had learned to adapt to the almost constant wind by wearing her hair up when she ventured outside.

 

She had already tucked her hair in a messy bun, and resigned herself to having stray waves floating around her by the time she reached her shop in the high street.

 

“Good morning, England.” She smiled as she looked up at the clouds racing across the achingly blue sky. “It’s good to be here.”

 

She slung her oversized leather bag over her shoulder and danced down the porch steps, eager to start the day.

Dean, Cate. Ghost of a Chance (Maggie Mulgrew Mysteries Book 1) (Kindle Locations 40-48). Pentam Press. Kindle Edition.

 

In three short paragraphs: three "hair" and two "waves."

 

Then there's the awkward syntax of "Like everything else in her adopted village of Holmestead, she had learned to adapt to the almost constant wind by wearing her hair up when she ventured outside."  Is this supposed to mean that everything else in the village has adapted to the wind by wearing its air up, or that Maggie has adapted to everything else in this manner?

 

The sentence structure is no less ambiguous in the next paragraph: Has Maggie resigned herself to the fact that by the time she reaches her destination her hair will be floating, or is said resignation a result of arriving at her destination and discovering her hair is floating?

 

Very few readers will notice any of this.  I'm now convinced that too many readers are too accustomed to too much poorly written crap to notice anything.  But reading an opening like this sets me on edge, to the point that I expect plot holes and flat characterization and errors of fact.  This is bad writing that desperately needs either a competent editor or a writer willing to learn the nuances of good writing.

 

One page.  That's all it takes to ruin what might conceivably be a decent story.

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url 2017-12-09 16:20
FREEBIE: "The Tomb of Heaven" (Fathom's Five, #4) by Geoffrey Knight

 

~ Currently FREE on Amazon. ~

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