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review 2016-10-03 00:00
Transcendent
Transcendent - Katelyn Detweiler Transcendent - Katelyn Detweiler DNF @ page 130

This book is not for me. I don't know what I thought it was going to be but this is definitely not it. I am 130 pages into the book and nothing has happened expect for discussion regarding the unbelievable story of Iris's birth. I just can't make myself want to pick this one up again.
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review 2015-12-21 02:18
Immaculate by Katelyn Detweiler
Immaculate - Katelyn Detweiler

As someone who is in their teens, the premise for author Katelyn Detweiler’s Immaculatesounded incredibly intriguing. A teenage virgin becoming pregnant in modern days? It sounded like a refreshing and new concept to be explored and I definitely wanted to see just what kind of story Detweiler would weave. What I can tell you is that Immaculate is the kind of novel that is beautifully written and feels real from the protagonist to the reactions of the cast of characters in the novel. Immaculatewas the kind of read that kept me on the edge of my seat from the first page to the very last.

               When seventeen year old Mina encounters a strange old woman at her workplace, she says just about anything and everything to get the woman to leave her alone. This includes agreeing to some unknown mission that is reserved for Mina and Mina alone. Mina is the kind of girl that everyone aspires to me. Intelligent, top of her class, with her future figured out and a life ahead of her. Two months later, Mina discovers that she is pregnant. The only problem is that she’s a virgin. Nobody believes her claims of virginity. Not her father or her boyfriend. As she loses some of the people closest to her, Mina finds a friend in her co-worker Jesse. As her pregnancy progresses, people from all over the planet hear of Mina’s miracle baby and she quickly discovers that her life will never be the same.

               The thing that makes the plot of Immaculate work is its protagonist. Mina is a character who carries the story’s plot forward. My greatest concern before heading into this novel was that Mina would be the kind of Mary Sue character who is perfect in every way, shape and form. Completely and totally flawless. I was concerned that she would be whining throughout the novel about her pregnancy and how she didn’t want a miracle baby. You can imagine my relief to discover that Mina is an amazing protagonist who needs to be seen more in YA.

               Mina is a character who is overall a strong female. She is prepared to stand up for herself and her family. She is resilient throughout her pregnancy. She faces the conflicts that come with her pregnancy with pride. Beyond that, Mina is a very well-written character. Throughout the novel’s progression readers can see the change in Mina’s mentality from a ‘child’ to a mother. Her protective maternal nature and long list of flaws are all part of what make her character work and in turn, help push the story’s plot forward.

               The entirety of Mina’s pregnancy is handled well by Detweiler as it is handled in a realistic sense. The people around Mina—her peers, her family, her neighbors—are all hostile toward her which is exactly how people would react towards a pregnant teenage girl claiming to be a virgin. The characters reactions and actions towards Mina offer not only a sense of drama but also give way to intense action that pushes the storyline into an entirely different direction. This realism, alongside the fact that there are still people with the capacity to believe Mina as well, definitely helped me fall in love with Immaculate.

               Then there’s Jesse. Jesse who is just adorable and kind and sweet. He’s everything that girls hope for in a guy. The way that he stands by Mina’s side and offers her friendship will warm the hearts of readers everywhere. Seriously, he’s kind of the ideal guy. He’s a character that most readers will swoon over indefinitely. I just hope that Mina’s story might continue and we’ll get to see more of him.

I would recommend Immaculate to readers who are interested in teen fiction, readers who are looking for a dramatic read, and to any readers who are looking for a very unique read.

Source: www.chapter-by-chapter.com/review-immaculate-by-katelyn-detweiler
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review 2015-06-24 15:28
Review: Immaculate!
Immaculate - Katelyn Detweiler

At A Glance

Genre:
Young Adult; Contemporary
Love Triangle/Insta Love?: Slight Triangle
Cliff Hanger:
Rating: 3 Stars

Score Sheet
All out of ten

Cover:
8
Plot: 7
Characters: 6
World Building: 6
Flow: 4
Series Congruity: n/a
Writing: 7
Ending: 5

Total: 7

In Depth

Best Part:
Virgin Mary!
Worst Part: Draggingggg.
Overall Feels Felt: Not ok!; Always say no!; That's it?!?

Conclusion

Continuing the Series:
n/a
Recommending: yah
Misc.:

Short Review: Well, a modern day virgin Mary, i was disappointed with this. Honestly this could have gone so much better in my opinion. They could have really played up the crazy peeps who were supporting who and all that. The ending was very iffy for me. She had the baby and that's the end! WTH. There needed to be so much more! How did the world react?!? Did they test it??? Ugh. So many unanswered questions! And the MC was flaky as a biscuit.

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review 2015-05-20 14:58
Review: Immaculate
Immaculate - Katelyn Detweiler

When this book hit my desk, I knew I just had to read it. It sounded really good and I was totally in for a story that would sweep me off my feet. Unfortunately, this book fell flat for me.

Issues: My biggest issue is that there are too many questions and not enough answers. Like, who is that old lady? Why did Mina fall pregnant while being a virgin? Is there a bigger picture to this? Are angels/demons/heaven/hell involved in any kind of way? Did Aliens in-pregnant her? GEEZE TELL ME WHAT IT IS!! This story is written well but doesn’t provide the reader with any bread crumbs to go on. I kept on reading, hoping that the author would drop a hint or two and instead, I found myself desperate for answers. Anything!! There was no indication of “SOMETHING BIG” was going to happen. The reader is left in a limbo at the end of the story and that folks just left me unsatisfied.

Story: The story follows a good lead. Mina is a well rounded girl, with good friends and a great boyfriend. She is indeed going places. She works hard and concentrates on school. I can relate how this unexpected pregnancy throws her off yet helps her character grow. While her life may be in shambles, she knows what she wants and fights for it.

Supernatural: There is definitely supernatural events going on. I, for one, would really want to know what! I would consider picking up the next book (if there is one) only to find some closure with this story. I can give the author that much credit. She definitely left me in a wonder of WHY? Why Mina? Why the pregnancy? Why the conspiracy? PLEASE TELL ME!!!

This is a good story is you definitely want to feel out of the loop. I wouldn’t recommend it if you want answers now because you won’t get them. So lets hope that there is a second book cause man, I really want to know.

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