Present tense. Of which I noticed the very first sentence and the very last. Everything in between? Cute and adorable and funny and charming and definitely steamy, or at least as steamy as it can get without actual sex being involved :)

Loved it! Too bad it's short, but at the same time I think it's perfect the way it ends (and where it ends) :)

5 stars.

Don't people ever learn? Put your ugly out there and it will explode in your face, and justly so.

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I read the excerpt on Amazon so that I can see what the commotion is about, why negative reviews and all. Suspicions confirmed. Prime one star material. My brain couldn't process the molasses of the writing, even tho the characters and their actions are so. damn. predictable and simplistic. Too much brain power was wasted on detangling the words.

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