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review 2015-04-09 13:07
I made it to 48%
The Alternate Door - Bruce H. Bretthauer

but it's a DNF for me.

 

too bad.  It has ancient Egypt, antiquities, a mystery and time travel.  I should love it, but it isn't working for me.

 

two of the reasons are in earlier posts, here and here;  but generally it was eye-rolling and irritating without anything good to make up for it, and I've had enough.  I know there's another five star read somewhere in my TBR, And I'm off to locate it.

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text 2015-04-09 05:41
This is for anybody who is younger than me, and that would be most of you . . .
The Alternate Door - Bruce H. Bretthauer

. . . , but this one has me flummoxed.

 

is it possible that a person who is thirty right now, could have grown up without having  encountered a splinter accident.  Have we really come so far?

 

Detective Gina has been kidnapped and locked in a room.

 

She had run her fingers over everything in the room, collecting a splinter from the windowsill in the process. The jab of the splinter— she worried about a possible infection— and the drops of blood as she finally removed the sliver and sucked at the wound, weren’t anything she’d ever experienced.

 

 

 

seriously?

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text 2015-04-08 22:59
I was in the mood for a mystery . . .
The Alternate Door - Bruce H. Bretthauer

And this one has time travel. score!

 

but the lead detective is a female, and the author is male.  I'm not sure, but I think I'm starting to have a problem with his portrayal of the detective.  First of all, I'm in chapter two and she's already mentioned "her girlish figure" twice.

 

then she goes to a restaurant frequented by the murder victim to interview the manager, and this happens:

 

Gina dug through her purse trying to find the envelope with Steve Robinson’s picture in it. Finally she just emptied her purse on the table: newspaper, her pistol with two spare clips, wallet, notebook and pen, a romance novel, a book of crossword puzzles, a croissant from Starbucks that was a couple of days old and should probably be thrown out, her compact, hairbrush and comb, lipstick, keys, ID folder with her badge, chap stick, breath mints, a handful of loose change, and, finally, down at the bottom, the elusive envelope.

 

See what I mean?  Besides, I wish he used her last name; Gina sounds too casual.

 

but, enough of that.  I'm probably getting to the good part now.

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