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review 2017-10-02 18:28
Review: "Axios: A Spartan Tale" by Jaclyn Osborn
Axios: A Spartan Tale - Jaclyn Osborn

 

~ 1 star ~

 

 

This was a 3.5 star, maybe even a 4 star read for me, until the last chapter.

 

MASSIVE SPOILER!

 

Apart from the never-ending discussion about whether a love story that doesn’t have "an emotionally satisfying and optimistic ending", or in other words: a happy ending (HEA or HFN) can be labelled as a "romance" or not (personally, I think: NOPE), I prefer my MCs at least to be ALIVE at the end of my books. I DON'T want to witness them being slaughtered on the battlefield, historically accurate wartime romance or not.

 

IF IT DOESN’T HAVE AN HEA (OR HFN), IT’S NOT ROMANCE!

 

 

You also might want to check out this blog post, which perfectly sums up my feelings regarding this issue.

 

Update: Just to clarify (because I feel awful to give such a low rating to such a nice author):

 

- as a "romance" novel: 1 star

- as a "(tragic) gay love story": 3.5 - 4 stars

 

The writing was good, the research was well-done, and the MCs and secondary characters were all very likable.

 

But I finished this book today with a heavy heart and it left me sad, and that's not what I am looking for when I choose to read a romance novel. 

 

(spoiler show)

 

 

 

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review 2017-07-19 17:12
Review: "Shiny!" by Amy Lane
Shiny! - Amy Lane

 

~ 3.5 stars ~

 

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review 2017-01-19 19:59
Review: "Five Times My Best Friend Kissed Me" by Anna Martin
Five Times My Best Friend Kissed Me and One Time I Kissed Him First - Anna Martin

"I fell in love with your eyes," Evan murmured. He smiled as Scott blinked them, letting the tears fall. "They're so blue."

"My eyes have always been blue," Scott said with a broken laugh.

"I know."

Scott shook his head slowly. "Since when?"

"Since forever. Since I was seven years old and Scott Sparrow was the coolest kid I'd ever met. He still is, you know."

 

There were two things that stood out in this friends-to-lovers story: the 5+1 writing structure, and chapters that were NOT in chronological order.

 

While the 5+1 idea (who owes its existence to fan fiction according to the author's note) worked pretty well for me, the order of the chapters did not. Every chapter focused on one of the 5+1 times that Scott and Evan kissed and the order was

 

  • The Second Time
  • The Fourth Time
  • The First Time
  • The Third Time
  • The Fifth Time
  • The One Time I ("Ethan") Kissed Him First

 

Now when I see a structure like this, I feel like there's supposed to be a certain purpose or a deeper meaning behind it. Like hidden clues, that are being mentioned in one chapter and picked up again in another one, or something that gives me a hint in the present timeline, but doesn't make full sense until I get to a flashback chapter.

 

 

But that wasn't the case here. The chapters just felt randomly jumbled, but they can be just as well read in chronological order and it wouldn't make any difference. On the contrary, I think that it would have definitely worked better this way, because the story didn't really flow naturally for me because of this and it detached me from the characters and their relationship. I have no idea why the author decided on this kind of narration structure or what its purpose was supposed to be.

 

 

Oh, and that final +1 chapter? LONGEST EPILOGUE EVER! It started at 80% and it went on and on and on, and I just wanted it to be over because the story has been told and the HEA has been had and there's always that one point in a story where I'm ready to say good-bye to the MCs because I don't want to know everything about their everyday life after their HEA because some things are better left to the imagination sometimes and now I'll just shut up.

 

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review 2017-01-13 17:36
Review: "Oral Fixation" by Piper Vaughn
An Oral Fixation - Piper Vaughn

"I've wanted you forever," Cooper said. He reached up and ran his thumb across Quinn's lover lip. "Longer than forever."

 

Super short, super cute, super hot.

 

But also super forgettable, I'm afraid.

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review 2017-01-12 20:48
Review: "Perfect Catch" by N.R. Walker
Perfect Catch - N.R. Walker

I don’t think you can write a better "friends-to-lovers" story than this one. Two guys, who have been friends for over ten years and who have been secretly in love with each other (but are both afraid to ruin their friendship), go on a fishing trip and everything changes. DURING A THUNDERSTORM!

 

Walker’s writing never fails to disappoint. She writes some of the best and most intense chemistries between her MCs for me. This story was also very steamy and sexually explicit as fuck, which I'm always down for (sue me!).

 

Only minus half a star because of a much needed, but unfortunately missing epilogue.

 

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