The Jack O'Lantern's Grin
Publish date: October 31st 2012
Publisher: Less Than Three Press LLC
Edition language: English
Series: LT3 Halloween Rentboys
poorly conceived—and not so hot with the execution, either.lots of telling, and very little showing—plus inscrutable characters and a plot so stupid it's almost physically grating.my opinion is that it sucks. your mileage may vary, but damned if I can see how.
I really enjoyed this story and I wish the author would write more like it. Like others I wished it was longer. I'm hopeful that the author will maybe come back and write another story based in the same universe as this one.
It was adorable.One point of contention, though.To the author:Ah. Surely you mean "wasp waist" and not "bee-sting waist." "Bee-stung" is generally used to describe lips. Just saying and all.