The Present in Room Four
Format: free online fiction
Prolly 2.5/5 (I'm feeling generous, so rounded up)It was good-ish, but then it got really cut-and-dry, really rote. Part of it, I think, was the brevity. It could have been expanded upon and explicated further. I think I'd like to know why exactly Greeves was such a bastard because he was painted in...
Wow, hot quick read. This is more like 3.5 stars, but things wrapped up way too quickly and easily in too short a time for me. I would love to read a more detailed story about TJ and Nicholas, perhaps showing their lives after they get away from Greeves.