The Virgin Submissive
Dear Author,It happened the third day of school. My new roommate turned to me and said, “I want you to kneel for me.” He didn’t ask, or joke, or explain. He just smiled like he knew exactly what would happen. And I… I obeyed, dropped down to my knees before I even thought about what I was doing....
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Dear Author,It happened the third day of school. My new roommate turned to me and said, “I want you to kneel for me.” He didn’t ask, or joke, or explain. He just smiled like he knew exactly what would happen. And I… I obeyed, dropped down to my knees before I even thought about what I was doing. I’d never done anything like that before, for anyone. It didn’t seem like such
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Format: ebook
Publisher: M/M Romance Group @ Goodreads
Pages no: 46
Edition language: English
Series: Love is an Open Road
3.5 starsWhat I liked : - Nate is like a force of nature. He's so dominant and possessive. - Although Alex is natural submissive, he's trying to stand up for himself. What I disliked : - I'm having hard time believing that they're in college.- Knife play? Without a consent or a safe word it would be...
Thanks to the author for the effort and participating in this event and offering this freebie.I only have one thing to say about this story, that it felt like reading the college gay short story version of "Fifty Shades of Grey" but without the darkness and added mystery, and with better writing.
While this story may seem cute on the surface, I had some issues at a deeper level. First, the BDSM aspects don't seem realistic. Nate seems a) older than he's supposed to be, which may be explained by his upbringing, and b) seems to not have much of an idea what being a Dom means. His commandeering...
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