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Working for the Devil (Dante Valentine, Book 1) - Community Reviews back

by Lilith Saintcrow
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Litchick's Hit List
Litchick's Hit List rated it 10 years ago
Ugh. No. Made it 25 pages in and every time the MC spoke I wanted to either choke her out or beg her to never speak again. Maybe I'll re-attempt later...
CluckingBell rated it 10 years ago
If you’re going to write a complex and difficult lead character using first-person narration, you’d better be pretty darn good at it, or the character may come off as erratic, unsympathetic, and ultimately render the entire plot unbelievable. For example, given her volatile mood swings and lack of i...
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