As the title states, this book is for beginners. And while it says ‘for women’ in the title, I will say it can be used by couples who are interested in expanding their repertoire, especially when it comes to pleasing a female partner during foreplay.

This book starts with a warning that it is not responsible for any injury incurred while testing the methods presented in this book. That sounded a little ominous to me and I quickly checked the title of the book – this is for beginners, right? There definitely shouldn’t be any injuries incurred while performing Beginners Level masturbation! But, no fear, there were not any injuries incurred due to this book.

Jacqueline Donne use to work at an adult store, so her approach to discussing female masturbation is straight forward with zero hesitancy. The information is presented in a clear, and sometimes playful, manner. This brief book starts off practically, going over the basic female anatomy. It then moves on to ways to masturbate, both with and without toys. She explains the differences in toys and specifically encourages women to get something they like, including considering the appearance. Apparently, it is not uncommon for women to name their toys, which was a surprise to me as I never have. But now I am tempted to. ;)

Basically, this is a short and sweet little book that would be useful to any woman who needs a little help getting started in the masturbation department. The information is told clearly and is tastefully presented.

Narration: Valerie Gilbert did a great job on the narration. I have heard that masturbation is a taboo subject (for some people) yet there was no hesitancy in Gilbert’s performance. She presented the book in a clear voice and added just a touch of friendliness when the author turned a little playful.

Chocolate on his Skin by Charlotte Mistry
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Makes Me Craves for Chocolates on a Hunky Boyfriend. Sinful Whipped Cream on You-know-where. Decorate him with Juicy Strawberries, Dainty Cakes and Other Sweet Delights. Then Savour him Slowly.

Anders went into what he thought was a modelling deal for a dinner function at an upscale hotel. Several months worth of rental was not an offer he could say no to and not want hit his head hard on the wall later.

Only he really had no idea what he had just signed up for and just imagine his surprise when he was loaded onto...

...a large platter then decorated with varieties of sweet treats and served to a crowd of hungry elites on the banquet table. The kitchen staff left no inch of his naked skin uncovered, leaving only his head free to face his mortification.

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I don't think he needs to worry too much, I am pretty sure he is the most delicious man in that conference room literally.

Jay and Thomas seems to agree with me wholeheartedly. Jay is such a wickedly perverse young man. He was hell-bent on enjoying Anders' body under any circumstances even a public setting was not a deterrence to him. Such a mischievous fellow. I am delighted he found Anders to be the ideal person to end his boredom and a good chance to tease his dear friend Thomas. Jay is impish while his friend Thomas was only a voyeurist enjoying Anders' helplessness towards Jay's lascivious attention.

Bon Appétit. 


Yum!


I am declaring this book to be the most mouth-watering story EVER. The food porn here is unbelievably hawt! Mistry sure knows what is erotic and sexy, she reads her readers well. The sexy and erotic part is good but the humor in it made it even greater. Reading it gave me a persistent goofy grin. I may look silly donning such a look at inappropriate venue but I don't care! I just love the fun too much.

Nuff said! This book sizzles and it makes me melt like chocolate in heat. Just a friendly warning though, DO NOT read this book with any kind of sweet treats around you. You might risk getting fat without even knowing how it happened. This is dangerous food porn not to be taken lightly but with huge servings of creams and come.

Someone took a delicate little cake from his shoulder. Another scooped fruit and honey onto a plate with the tines of a fork. It jabbed him, a little, and he tried not to wince. Someone laughed.
- This sounds pretty normal if the one that got jabbed wasn't lying on a platter as a desert platter. Lol

Imagine all these goodies spread on a gorgeous hunk covered with honey and chocolates...



Then imagine this... "Excuse me Sir, would you care for a bite of cum-filled pastry?". Just a joke of course. LMAO

There should be a sign on that buffet table that says: Please dine with caution. Do not rush to the table with sharp objects. Our model's wellbeing depends upon your discretion.


BOOK DETAILS: 
Title: Chocolate on his Skin
Author: Charlotte Mistry
Publication Date: July 28th, 2012 
Publisher: Self-pub
Type: Short Story, 4,300 words (approximate)
Genre: Contemporary Gay Erotica
Characters: Anders (a young male model), Jay/Jonathan Kells (Heir of a wealthy businessman) and Thomas (Heir of a wealthy businessman and also a friend of Jay)
Tags/Keywords: 

dubcon, threesome, menage, public sex, gay erotica, voyeurism, molestation, masturbation, feeding, whipped cream, food fetish, variation of Nantaimori (男体盛り), living dessert platter, naked body, objectification, food play

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Description:
When Anders is hired to be the centerpiece of an upscale dinner party, he doesn't know what it's going to entail. Having people eat off of him is one thing, but when two bored businessmen's sons take an interest, can he keep himself under control? Warning: this 4300 word erotic short story contains public gay sex, food fetishism, voyeurism, feeding, and the inappropriate use of whipped cream!

Excerpt:

“So you do talk.” Anders nodded, barely perceptible, and Thomas grinned down at him. “You hungry or anything? You’ve been here a while.” He didn’t wait for a response before he was scooping up one of the little cakes, dripping with honey.

The pads of his fingertips slid stickily along Anders’ skin, and Anders bit his lip to keep from taking an indrawn breath. It had felt good, and that was a reaction that he really, really shouldn’t be having right now. Then those sticky fingertips were brushing his lips, and Anders had to either open his mouth or get cake smeared all over his face.

He opened his mouth. The cake was sweet on his tongue, the honey a burst of flavor. He licked his lower lip and caught Thomas’ index finger by accident. Thomas was looking at him a little funny, and then he lifted his hand absentmindedly to lick the excess honey from the backs of his knuckles.

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26-Jan-2014:
Bought from Kobobooks today.


12-July-2013:
This book features Nantaimori ("male body sushi") ('∀'●)♡ And it's a gay menage body sushi! Woohoo! Eating food off sexy male model. 

Yum! what more could a M/M fangirl ask for? I just wish the price is lower tho. This is a shorty and it cost USD2.99. :(

I would still wish to read it.

https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/209341

 

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Winner Takes All: Master/Slave Fantasies by Christopher Pierce My rating: 5 of 5 stars

If I have a soaking-wet-panties-shelf here on GR, this book would definitely be on it.

Therefore 5 Brilliant Lip-Smacking Stars for this high quality collection of BDSM erotica.

It's a must read for all TPE (Total Power Exchange) fans. Especially those who loves good doses of manhandling and masculinity in their BDSM stories.

Contained within its pages are Master/Slave Fantasies that shows us how consensual slavery could be a very fulfilling and erotic experience. Apart from that it also enlightens us on what makes a dom or a sub tick. 

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STORY #1:  Collared at the Dog Pound - Sub's POV
An exciting lost-pup-finds-a-master story. 
Said pup quickly found himself in a hot mess of pain and pleasure under the firm hands of his new found master. The ending plastered a wide smile on my face.

Story codes/tags: D/S, Dog Slave, Watersports, Rough Sex, Masturbation, Anal Sex, Hot Manhandling, Breathplay
RATING: 4 stars

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 STORY #2:  Hard Day's Reward - Sub's POV
A master kept his slave under stringent orgasm control and denied him release even when he was mercilessly stimulated. The master then rewarded his obedient slave with a fresh juicy boy. It's the best reward for the slave as he used to be a Top before submitting as a full-time slave now. He especially enjoys breaking boys with attitude issue.

This story made me want to crawl into the book to play along with the guys. I wanted to own that juicy ass! It was such a pleasure watching a slave turned into a full-fledged master displaying his prowess at owning a cocky young slave's ass. Expertly turning him into true boymeat, whimpering and begging to be fucked. The boy moans so sweetly and so eagerly it's like music to my ears.

I would give this story a 10 stars if I could. It's one of the hottest story in this sexy anthology. 

Story codes/tags: D/S, Anal Sex, Slave vs Slave, Collar & leash, Manhandling, Blowjob, Humiliation-degradation
RATING: 10 rewarding stars

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STORY #3:  Goodnight, My Slaveboys - Dom's POV
A master who owns a total of 5 slaves. Every night he would tenderly tucks each one of his securely bound slaves to bed. They are all perfectly well trained loyal slaveboys who eats cums like ice cream and live to serve.

This story is rather tender and soft. I liked it but it wasn't as hot as the other stories here.

Story codes/tags: Various Bondage, Dog Slave, Handjob, Blowjob, Anal Sex
RATING: 3 stars

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STORY #4:  First-Time Slave - Sub's POV
A submissive guy first foray into master/slave relationship. He gets a taste of it at the hands of a non-nonsense master. He was put into strict bondage with a touch of sensory deprivation. Robbed of sight and ability to communicate, the sub found himself at total mercy of his master and loving the mingling of fear and excitement.

The emotions and feelings of the first time slave experiencing his first bondage experience was clearly translated. I appreciate that very much. That hooding scene got me so hot and bothered due the the level of anxiety the new slave exuded. It was electrifying to me.

Story codes/tags: Bondage, Hooding, Gag, Chains, D/S, Partial Sensory Deprivation, Anal Sex, Orgasm Denial
RATING: 4 stars

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STORY #5:  The Piss Mummy - Dom's POV
Story number 5 involved a submissive-piss-worshiping-boy and a master who gets off on bestowing his golden streams on deserving boys.

We would get tight bondage and some manhandling and of course jets and jets of warm you-know-what on you-know-where. Basically, there isn't much happening here just someone drowning in piss and some jacking off. Of course if you have golden shower kink, then it's a different thing altogether.

Story codes/tags: Bondage, Watersports, Anal Sex, Handjob, Masturbation 
RATING: 3 stars

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STORY #6:  Five Bucks a Swat - Sub's POV
MC's master loves tight bubble butts for his spanking kink. Slave boy Spanky is fortunate his prized butt received ample attention from his master. One night master decided to flaunt Spanky's delicious tight buns for the benefit of charity. 

Story codes/tags: Bondage, Spanking, Handjob
RATING: 3 stars

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 STORY #7:  The Executioner’s Boy (Medieval times) - Sub's POV
A farm boy was obsessed with an executioner and kept going into town just to ogle the man even if it means having to watch the executions of unfortunate souls. The boy was drawn to the power held by the executioner. He was also fascinated with fear itself. He is very much like a fearless little moth fluttering closer and closer to the burning hot flame until self-immolation. 

When the boy finally caught the eyes of his idol things took a nasty turn and the boy found himself under the full domination of the man he had worshiped all this while. He was steadily broken down by this demanding man who now selfishly calls himself his master. 

This is another story I am happy to give 10 shiny stars. You need dark and gritty in your erotica to enhance your sexual excitement? This is it. This is the story for you. It would drown you in pleasure of total domination over a man and also offer sexual ignition of full submission. The epic twisted love in this one makes me tingle all over. Stockholm was out to play....

The man in the black hood became the focus of my existence. He was my captor, my kidnapper, my king, my god, and my family all at once — the one human being I had contact with and therefore the one on which I lavished all my emotions. I hated him, despised him . . . yet loved him, too.

 
The Executioner’s Boy has a psychological appeal to it. The reconditioning of the farm boy was fascinating to follow yet quite disturbing to watch. The executioner is an extremely harsh master. Consider yourself warned.

Story codes/tags: Bondage, Chastity device, Orgasm denial, Piercings, Rapes, Gangbanging, Blowjob, Flogging, Watersports, Anal Sex, Torture
RATING: 10 friggin stars

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STORY #8:  Fucking Master’s Lover - Sub's POV
Another orgasm denial master who loves to sexually torture his slave boy by fucking and jerking him off constantly but not letting him come. This slave boy is a bit of a switch. He has a dominant side strong enough to top. With balls bursting full of mancream, there's no chance of him ever saying no to a sexy man proffering himself so wantonly even if it was his master's lover. 

This is fucking with the element of danger and guilt. An added thrill to the adulterous, sexually frustrated pair.

Story codes/tags: Bondage, Blowjob, Anal Sex, Rough Sex, Adultery, Orgasm denial
RATING: 3 stars

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STORY #9:  Home-Made Lube - Sub's POV
An on loan slave is about to be stuffed turkey. A meaty foot long sausage stuffed turkey. And it isn't even Thanksgiving yet. Thing is one important ingredient for preparation was missing and the master was getting really annoyed. What would happen to this poor slave?

Uhmm that home-made lube is very organic. But doesn't that defeat the purpose of having the latex on?

Story codes/tags: Bondage, Butt rimming, Handjob, Anal Sex
RATING: 3 stars

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STORY #10:  The Horny Houseguest - Sub's POV
Horny dog boy looking forward to being plowed by an equally horny guest with the blessings of his owner. The owner even graciously offered a selective of toys for his guest to play with his dog boy.

I like how pet boy behaves much like a real domesticated doggy. He was frisky and ready to play. Such a lovable pup. I want one.

Story codes/tags: Dog slave, Blowjob, Toys, Sexy manhandling, Bondage, Anal Sex
RATING: 4 stars

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STORY #11:  Isle of Chains (alternate world) - Sub's POV
Conga was on a quest to find and retrieve his best friend Lagan who was missing for half a year already. He felt a mysterious pull from the Isle of Chains a forbidden island where not one returns once they step ashore. Conga was surprised, amazed and shocked by what he found on that island. Will he be able to save his friend and return home safely? Would he want to return now that he had found what he has been missing all these years? Something he didn't know he needed to complete his life with.

The premise of the story was quite interesting and original. The world building was steady and debaucheries of all kinds was found within that mysterious island. Yet I only find this story to be satisfactory but not wow although it does have the most elaborated setup compared with the rest of the stories in this anthology. 

Story codes/tags: D/S, Bondage, Flogging, Watersports, Blowjob, Anal Sex, Fisting, Sex Toys, Orgasm denial, Rough Sex, Rape, Collaring 
RATING: 3 stars

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STORY #12:  Fucked by a Stranger - Sub's POV
The MC was a bondage slave and he's very much an exhibitionist. He gets all aroused with others watching him being plowed. While I am aroused watching from the other end.

We get to see slaveboy MC submitting to an anonymous fuck while in full bondage in effort to please his Master. Not much of a submission on his part since he is loving every seconds of it. Hehehe. I liked that the MC puts on a show of defiance for his Master because he knew his Master likes his boy spirited. I have to agree with his Master that a bound, struggling and squirming slave is much more fun to watch than a dead fish.  The MC is such a good boy to try to heighten the pleasure of this voyeuristic Master the best of his ability.

Story codes/tags: Bondage, Anal Sex, Fingering, Ass playing, Paddling
RATING: 3 stars

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STORY #13:  Two-Slaveboy, Wrap-up - Sub's POV
A story of creative slaveboys mummification. Double the mummy, double the fun. Mummy fucking mummy is hot. 

But when you’re mummified you’re like a shrink-wrapped product on a store shelf — you can’t move except to breathe.

Story codes/tags: Bondage, Mummification, Anal Sex, Handjob
RATING: 3.5 stars

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 STORY #14:  Sold to the Highest Bidder - Sub's POV
A very exciting scenario where a slaveboy got himself unceremoniously sold off for pissing off his master by questioning his ownership of him. Looks like he is going to have to learn his lessons the hard way. What went on during the slave processing and auctioning was what gave this story a strong 5 stars! The hot manhandling alone was already the dizzying aspect of this story which I love love to bits! 

Story codes/tags: Bondage, Blindfold, Forced Blowjob, Flogging and Whipping (corporal punishments), Anal Sex, Gangbanging, Rapes, Lots of manhandling, Slave Auction
RATING: 5 Satisfied Stars

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STORY #15:  Master's New Toy - Sub's POV
A 24/7 slaveboy was excited to watch his master train a new boy and was surprised his Master's generosity towards the end. 

Yup, I love this one too. Loving all the hot domination and the total submission by the slave boys was highly arousing. 

Picking the kid up, I slung him over my shoulder. I love carrying guys. Something about the weight of their bodies on me, their submission to me and my will . . . it’s totally fucking erotic.
- Hear, hear.

Story codes/tags: Bondage, Blindfold, Flogging, Blowjob, Sex Toys, Spit-roasting
RATING: 4 stars

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STORY #16:  Scent Slave (a touch of magic) - Dom's POV
The MC of this story found that he had an uncanny sexual power - the more semen he accumulates in his sack, the more appealing he would be to others. It's like having strong pheromones and everyone would want a piece of you.

Ever since the MC saw Bryan a fellow gym mate, he was smitten and driven to own him. Hence he started his full cum sackseduction plan. Would Bryan be able to resist the MC's compelling scent? Or would he start begging to be owned and used?

It was sexy in some part but parts of it made me laughed. :P

Story codes/tags: Self Orgasm Denial, Masturbation, Seduction, D/S
RATING: 3 stars

 

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 STORY #17:  Winner Takes All - Sub's POV
Slave Josh found himself stuffed into a man-size duffle bag, bound and gagged, as a prize to a stranger who has won him for the weekend. His weekend Master was a stern and demanding man. Josh struggled to keep up with his temporary master and trying his best not to let his original master down. However it wasn't an easy task to satisfy Master Max who constantly test Josh's resolves with painful and degrading tasks. Slaveboy Josh has one hell of a weekend to survive. Will he be able to keep his good boy record until he returns to his master?

I got all the right sorts of vibes from this story. Large dominating males towering over their subs. There is so much testosterone in this story alone I could almost smell it in the air. It's like breathing in sexy manly pheromones. Yup this was yet another story with lots of erotic manhandling. 

I am glad Slaveboy Josh met Master Max. He brought out the best in Josh. He might be highly dominating and rough but he does have a tender side which I liked very much. In short, Slaveboy Josh had experienced the most intense sessions with Master Max over the weekend. It was painful and harrowing but it was also exhilarating, mind-altering and filled Josh with much joy for Josh. Lastly, I agree with other reviewers that...

Master Bill was too blind and idiotic to recognize such a slaveboy gem like Josh who is always ready to serve and submit without a complaint. I was kinda expecting or wishing Master Max would sock him a good one when he dumped Josh like trash in public. Too bad I have to do that in my mind since Master Max didn't react the way I wanted. Ahh... pulverizing Master Bill feels so good.

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Story codes/tags: Bondage, Anal Sex, Handjob, Tortures, Sex Toys, Humiliation-Degradation, Flogging, Gangbanging, Quasirapes, Rough Sex, Watersports, Collaring, Dog Slave, Enema
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OVERVIEW
The writing has a pronounced masculinity which I found compelling as it highlights virility and that is sexy to me. I am also delighted to learn that there are so many different terms to refer to the male sexual organ other than just cock or penis. I have also learned that different ways of calling a penis evokes different feelings. Words usage are important and it is powerful when used right. Tube-steak and cum sack makes me go wild with desire. So yea the writing is strong and honed to please.

Winner Takes All is erotica done right. It delivers what it promised; it helps its reader to get off. That is what we are looking for in our erotica right? Not only was it well written, it held true power to ignite our sexual desire hence I call this quality erotica.

This anthology is heavy on TPE, domination and submission, sweet sexual torments like orgasm denial, delicious bondage of various kinds, lots of humiliation and degradation, watersports and some corporal punishments. There are a couple of scenes which might freak out some vanilla readers. Otherwise all else is aim to please readers who enjoys serious BDSM that leans more towards the hardcore side.

I have enjoyed this book immensely and had a tough time suppressing my urge to highlight the whole book. If you are those who enjoys getting into the minds of a real dom or sub, this book is definitely for you as it portrays them perfectly. You would find yourself swept away into the minds of the narrators experiencing their realities where every flicker of their emotions are closely felt by you. This book was written with passion and the desire to bring Master/Slave fantasies to life. 

One more thing, please try not to skip the Editor's Note or the Foreword. Both was brilliantly written and you would gain insights on what this anthology is about and what it aims to achieve apart from other tidbits.
 


Sigh... cover love <3

BOOK DETAILS:

Title: Winner Takes All: Master/Slave Fantasies by Christopher Pierce
Author: Christopher Pierce
Publication Date: December 20th, 2011
Publisher: Perfectbound Press
Type: Anthologies (Short Stories), 95,836 words (approximate)
Genre: Gay BDSM Erotica

Description:
The prolific author Christopher Pierce (christopherpierceerotica.com) has appeared in practically every gay magazine and more than three dozen story anthologies. WINNER TAKES ALL, his newest collection, offers the title novella and 16 shorter stories about gay Master/slave relationships, ranging from the edgiest to the most romantic with every variation in between. While only a few stories are set in other times or other worlds than our own, they are all sex fantasies, not slices of life. Their aim is to entertain, which they do splendidly. Advance readers of WINNER TAKES ALL have said that "Masters and slaves pop off the pages like heroic figures from the leather underworld" (Jay Starre) in "lip-smackingly kinky tales" (Jeff Mann) featuring "beautiful language, touching characterization, poignant plotting, and a full-bodied eroticism" (M. Christian, in his Foreword). The stunning original cover images are by Thom Magister, himself a Perfectbound Press author (THE SLAVE JOURNALS AND OTHER TALES OF THE OLD GUARD).




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Jumbo by Todd Young
My rating: 3.5 of 5 stars
Read from January 18 to 23, 2014 — I own a copy, read count: 1

This has got to be the oddest book I've ever read. I am truly lost as to how to rate it. The book was engrossing and I did enjoyed it. Yet it does have its flaws. Do I love that retractable cock and balls enough to rate it beyond 3 stars?

I am going with a 3.5 stars since I am very much infatuated with micropenises now. And I find that I enjoyed the blue balls feeling caused by the high amount of sexual frustrations within the book, although I do lack the proper equipment to really feel that sweet agony. I love it. Love, love the frustrations.

Romance? What romance? It's lust baby. This story is about pure unadulterated L.U.S.T. of horny teenagers. And it's freaking hot in my opinion. You'll get mouthful eyeful of cocks and balls of different sizes and variation attached to young sexy guys frolicking in the shower room. I guarantee you lots of ogling voyeuristic opportunities as there are countless locker room group shower scenes.


THE MC AND HIS QUIRKS
Mitchell an 18-year-old hormonal high schooler is plagued with constant worries over his undeveloped under-develop male package. His peen and balls is so small he could easily be mistaken as a girl. His boyfriend says it looks much like a nipple especially when Mitchell is scared or cold. This is because his mini peen and balls would retracts itself back into his body in such situations. By the way, his boyfriend adores his unique genitalia. Actually his boyfriend is borderline obsessed with it just like I am right now. I loved that he got...

 

shaved 'there' later on in the story.

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It makes him so sexy, I felt like I was going to get a cardiac arrest from lusting over his peen him. Suddenly fellatio sounds appealing to me again.

Being a teenager, Mitch has boundless sexual energy and he is of course often horny. Hell, he practically has a hard-on 24/7 that he rationalise as a necessity to fill his empty briefs pouch. Personality wise, Mitchell is immature, conflicted and has very low opinion of himself. His self worth is so low that he is practically asking everyone to step all over him making him the perfect target for school bullies. Even his own swim coach abuses and belittles him. Things at home wasn't a bed of roses for him either although he did have a family that loves him.

As I've said, Mitchell is a horny kid. He's highly voyeuristic and was having the time of his life ogling his swim teammates aside from spending half of his time fantasizing being taken especially by a group of guys. Furthermore, he harbours a potentially dangerous kink... 

 

he likes to stuff his anus with large long objects.

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It makes me cringe at the stunts he pulled just to sate this kink of his. He is such a lusty, kinky and self-absorbed kid. There are times I felt like giving his ass a firm kick when he is being a total jerk due to his turbulent mood swings (very much like PMS). It's not an easy task trying to figure him out. His characterisation is a little bit wonky. At times his sudden switches between the hot and the cold attitude annoys me - his fickle-mindedness drives me up the wall. It's a wonder how his boyfriend could stand him. Then again, I would forgive him of anything when I think of how cute his compact package is. *swoons*


READERS DEBATE AND POINTS TO PONDER
Some readers doubted the plausibility of what the boys did in the school locker room showers. While I agreed that Mr. Young might have over exaggerated it, but this is erotica so what's hot has got to be on the page right? So yea, cum on me with your horse dick all you want, we are in the shower anyways. There is one think I am most curious of during the shower scenes, is that whether it is normal to get a boner when sharing a communal shower with the same sex? Or is it a taboo? Would it trigger raining of fists?


SUMMING IT UP
Yes I am happily soaking up all the hotness and kinkiness of this story not particularly caring about the dramas or romance, especially the romance since there isn't much of it to speak of. I maintain that it's all lust not love. This book is so not for the fluff readers.

I believe I am seeing and appreciating this book for what it is. In my view, it has achieved its goals to titillate me. I do wonder if I am the only one that looks at this book from the erotica angle?

If you are pervy and thinks like a dude, you might just enjoy this book as much as I weirdly did.

Sharing a few of my favorite scenes here. Those that made me hot and bothered and gets stuck in my head:

 

1) Frankly I find most of the locker room showers scenes to be hot. Sexy soapy guys sliding and bumping against each other. *sighs contently*
2) The wet dream Mitchell had.I mean how can one forget such a strange dream where every boy looks like they got sexually nullified? And then you get to put on someone else's penis and ball?
3) Mitchell's first time sex with his horse-hung boyfriend.
4) The fisting scene. It was stimulating yet I felt scared for Mitchell cos I thought his boyfriend had accidentally torn something with the amount of pain Mitchell was going through. O.O
5) That freaking hawt fellatio by his boyfriend on his minipeen *experiencing massive blood lost from a gushing bloody nose*
6) The last scene in the communal shower with the swim team. I wanna be there groping him too.

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ABOUT THE ENDING
There's a part in the book where Mitchell has a weird wet dream. I think that's the gayest dream ever! I am bringing this up because what happened at the ending was close to the events in that crazy lusty dream of his. It's like a dream comes true for Mitchell. I wanted to be there too, enjoying his erotic body.

Lastly, I must add that the ending was abrupt and it left quite a few unresolved issues. Nevertheless it was an unconventional ending and I do appreciate such endings.





BOOK DETAILS:

Title: Jumbo
Author: Todd Young
Publication Date: May 9th, 2012
Type: Novel, 58,200 words (approximate)
Genre: Gay Erotica, Contemporary Fiction
Tags/Keywords: abnormal physical condition, micropenis, buried penis, penis size, insecurities, low self esteem, school bullying, bullies, abusive teacher, clueless young man, horse-hung, sports jocks, swimming, swim team, swim practice, swimming competition, skinny dipping, anal sex, fisting, voyeurism, exhibitionist, male ogling, sexy bods, locker room, shared shower room, gay curious, horny guys, students, high schoolers, masturbation, jerk off, wank, handjob, fellatio, blowjob, shaved pubes, speedo, teenagers, teenage-angst, sexual frustrations, hedonistic male, sexual tension

Description:
Mitchell has a problem. He’s a little too small where it counts. The guys on the swim team have started calling him Jumbo — a cruel joke — and meanwhile he’s in love with his best friend, Luke. But when Mitchell starts receiving love letters in his locker, can they really be from Luke? Or are they from someone big enough to love him just the way he is?



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* Reviewed on January 25th, 2014

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