DNF. The heart of the story has promise, but the writing is just too awkward for me to struggle with anymore. And the Merlin here is just about the biggest woobie that ever woobied a woob.
I wasn't planning to add another Merlin/Arthur fanfic to GR database and to write a review of it -- but even now, 12 hours after I finished, and I still can't get this story out of my head. I need an outlet to let my feeling out. So here I am, writing one.I can't say that the author offers a new the...