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by West Thornhill

MLE's Porn and Ponies rated it

12 years ago

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POV changes made it very hard for me to follow what was going on, and I lost track of who was who in the shuffle more than once. I think I would have found it sexier if I had a better understanding of who the characters were, and their friendship before the events in this story. It felt like the all...

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elspeth's ephemeral musings rated it

12 years ago

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This was well written, but bondage isn't my cup of tea.

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Nic Starr rated it

12 years ago

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This is a free short story from Love is Always Write - Volume 1.Nice story about 2 sports coaches and their first time together. Had the potential to be a good full length story as I would have been keen to find out what happened next.

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elizabetta rated it

13 years ago

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1.5 stars I didn't like this much. Definitely PWP and so scrambled with lots of superfluous characters. Let's see...Greg, Jeff, Quinn, Pancho, Curt, Raiden. A lacrosse coach and a soccer coach. And POV hopping. Cocks doing a 'happy dance' (what is that?). And a guy falls asleep on a dining chair...

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Princess Bookie (Virginia on GR) rated it

13 years ago

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Hot little short. Would have liked a little more back story about the guys but this was good for LIAW event.

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Princess Bookie (Virginia on GR) rated it

13 years ago

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Hot little short. Would have liked a little more back story about the guys but this was good for LIAW event.

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Sandra rated it

13 years ago

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MaiMai rated it

13 years ago

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3.5 Stars

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Heidi Belleau Reads rated it

13 years ago

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I just couldn't get a handle on the ping-pong back and forth of the POV in this short. Two paragraphs in one dude's head, and then suddenly we were in the other dude's head. As such, I really didn't get to know either of the characters at all. I found it hard remembering who was Jeff and who was Gre...

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JustJen rated it

13 years ago

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No problems with the writing in this short story, mostly just with the finer points that I questioned as the story went on. Are people actually able to fall asleep upright in chairs like that? What took these two so long to get together, long enough that they realize they love each other after havi...

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