Switching POV's got me confused little. MC's talking, instead of fleeing (never mind another person is endangered too), was extremely frustrating. However, this is a short story for a free event and other than those two instances I really enjoyed the adventure. The world building is pretty good for...
My Thoughts - 3 out of 5 unicorns - I liked it!I liked this story, but too many unanswered questions. It didn’t feel like it should be a short story. It is a quick read only 18 pages. It is a story of what I call emotional/psychological torture and how the boy is struggling to get past it & of 2 ...
I was already fascinated after reading the 1st paragraph. It is quite a disturbing story to read about living feeling beings being treated like a thing, an object to do with as one wished and to be disposed off on a whim. I truly wish for more of this fascinating story after finishing it. It made me...
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