Thanks to the author for the effort and participating in this event.This was okay, the thing is I don't believe in open relationships but I was curious to read this to see how does it work, to me the writing was over doing it especially in the sex scenes and dirty talk that it extracted the intimacy...
I'm choosing not to rate this as it just wasn't what I was expecting :( :( You can't win them all :( :(
I just don't know what I even read???I got nothing out of it. I'm so sorry to say.But I have gone onto part 2 [b:The Wretched Tales 1.2|17727354|The Wretched Tales 1.2|Blmorticia|http://d.gr-assets.com/books/1364954252s/17727354.jpg|24797668] to see if it improves??? We'll see????
One Helluva First Date Cade Spencer is at Bobby Leslie welcome home celebration and getting drunk (he's still getting over a relationship thats ended six month beforehand and he wallowing in sorrow). Bobby Leslie learns from a mutual friend that Cade's been crushing on him for years and since Bobby ...
Holy shit this sucked, and not just the plot the writing was horrible. It was stilted, jarring, and very juvenile. I ended up skimming to the end, not that I cared what happened, I just have been getting a lot of grief for reviewing unfinished books. Well I never should have bothered, nothing happen...
Bridging the divide between the zealous and the apathetic takes compromise. That's exactly what Bryant concludes when trying to turn his grinch, Nathan into a Holiday elf. Stilted dialogue that was difficult to assign and thus seemed liable to be either MC took away from this short.
This short is pretty funny but not in the way the author intended I think. These chatty guys have the cheesiest dialogue. The main point of the story is to show just how much Bryant loves Christmas and Nathan hates it. Ok, fine, but pretty flat storytelling really and the only connection between the...
Rounding up for being free! This is a free short about an established couple, Bryant and Nathan.I'm not sure if there has been a story about them before and this is just a freebie to catch up with them or not.But it's pretty much Bryant wanting to go all out for Christmas and his lover not wanting i...
1.5 starsLooks like I have to be the grinch here, but this story was totally wishy-washy. Nothing substantial whatsoever. The use of 'Lieutenant' was annoying, on the other hand the dialogue was more fitting for 15 year old girls. From around 60% I was skimming, which with regard to the shortness of...
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