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Best Vacation that Never Was - Community Reviews back

by Lynn Lorenz
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jules0623
jules0623 rated it 13 years ago
I managed about 20% of the story but the pacing turned me right off. Insta-love is okay but needs to be written carefully. This was too clunky.
Candice
Candice rated it 13 years ago
This was a sweet story if you can get over the insta-love. A little bit annoying at times because if the two of them would just talk, then they would know how each other felt, but nevertheless a nice read.
Mandy, I read obsessively
Mandy, I read obsessively rated it 13 years ago
Sweet story, a bit of instant love/lust, but an enjoyable read.The Dom/sub storyline felt a bit off to me, sort of thrown in there, but not necessary.
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