This could have been an incredible story. The ground work had been done, the characters well created, but it stopped short (as so many of Betsy's stories do) I would have liked more info, more detail and more storyline.Still an interesting concept. Another good story from Betsy.NOTE: I receieved a c...
Too short!This was a snapshot into Emily's life. You don't know much about Emily, the focus is on unimportant things. Great amounts of detail are given to the every day struggle in this and I felt it made it a bit boring.I would have liked to see more dimension of the characters, a longer intro to E...
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