by Sam Crescent
i loved this book that's just the type of erotica i like with rough sex alpha male and womens who stands against they mens and sam crescent being from london makes it even more special def 5 out of 5
All the pieces were there to make an excellent story...but somehow they didn't connect to make a complete picture. There's lots of tears and drama packed into the short story. Here's hoping the next in the series gets it right.
2.5 starsI liked the story line and the characters, but the execution fell short. As another reviewer mentioned, the sentence structure was a bit off. I hate when I am pulled out of a story to try and rework a sentence in order to make it flow better.
2/5; 2 stars; C+This could have been a kind of sweet romance and it was to some extent but the inconsistent actions of the characters, coupled with incredibly poor sentence structure and grammar moved it into 'just ok' territory.
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