Peter is a stow-away on a boat. When the captain finds Peter, he throws him off the boat into the ocean. In the ocean, Peter meets Cuke, a sea-elf. Cuke saves Peter. They have great sex while surviving on a remote Caribbean Island. They make a baby. All is well. Good story. *********************...
Peter is a stow-away on a boat. When the captain finds Peter, he throws him off the boat into the ocean. In the ocean Peter meets Cuke, a sea-elf. Cuke saves Peter. They have great sex while surviving on a remote Caribbean Island. They make a baby. All is well. Good story.*********************On the...
Desperately needs a proofreader, wrong tense verbs, missing punctuation., equals hard to push on through.
Chase and Brad are okay characters, neither had personalities I had hated. My only issue was that their attraction to each other felt superficial. It just felt like if Chase or Brad had a bigger selection of individuals to choose from for bed partners they wouldn't have really chosen each other or t...
happy i didn't waste money on it.... this is my favorite storyline. undercover bdsm.. but the ending. the story was so slow in some parts but the ending is just BAM over.
Why did the author bother with the undecover / human trafficking plot? it's such an interestig and serious subject, and yet there was so little of it [and I mean this. Most of the book is leading up to the one scene that contains the basic idea for the book, and i really don't know why they existed...
It looked good. The blurb sounded right up my alley- Leo's undercover work, etc. and, well, kudos to the author for starting the craft so late. It's harder than it looks.I REALLY liked the general plot/story idea- the human traffic angle, the forced 'undercover relationship, and if course, the m/...
There were things about this story that bugged me (i.e. the over usage of a certain word, it felt a bit disjointed, no details about when Johnny started having feelings for Mike, etc) but although that was the case I felt it was a pretty okay read. The ending left me a bit unsatisfied but wasn't alt...
M/M HFN with a 'gay-for-you' theme. An ex-marine comes home to his small hometown and screws his bully. Not bad for a free read. Very short.The characters' names confusing as reading - Chad & Chase. Author, please consider using names that are not so similar.