Sweet story with clunky writing. Needs contractions and a good bit of editing. The characters are good, and the premise is classic.
While let's face it, when it comes to May/December romance, the whole "I'm too old for you, we are in different phase in life, you will need to live your life and I will just drag you down" issue has been hashed and rehashed so many times ... but it doesn't mean that it becomes boring when it's done...
This was a nice enough and the ending was perfect. I adored that ending. If you don't like big age gaps between the characters, avoid this.
BEARS?! Oh yeah!P.S. I hope the page count is indicative of what's to cum between the pages. *eyebrow waggle*
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