Weird word choices kept me from getting into the story, things like ""the other male"" rather than ""the other man."" Also, never really saw any reason to like Darshan, or why Sal would. And too many things were hinted at without being clarified, like what Sal does for a living; either leave it out ...
This book left me with a lot of unanswered questions. I can't even begin to explain where the story went wrong for me because it was disjointed. Usually I love stories where the men have children but this one just didn't do it for me.Oh, and the daughter was annoying. They kept buying her expensive ...
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