by Lily Sawyer
4 cuz I'm in the mood for some merman sex.Hmm...there are a couple of niggles here and there, but merman sex. What can I say?Overall plot: prolly more of a 2.5Realism (ignoring the merman): ehh...3?World creation: 3.5Characterization/development: 3-3.5Ending rather bothered me.It's interesting to se...
With its almost classic pairing of a merman and a human, this could have been a nice enough fairytale, but it fell completely short for me due to its plot flaws. They kept ripping me out of the story right from the moment when Jaran took off his magical ring and, just like this, was human again. C...
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