Story moves quickly, and I enjoyed the two heroes. Like others commenting here, I found the narrative confusing in parts, but eventually got into the flow of the story. Some of the sex seems behind closed doors - that might be a turn off for some (and welcomed by others).
One flashback for back-story is fine but this sucker popped back and forth repeatedly and was nothing but frustrating. What made me so angry was I really liked the MC's and their kink was different and I wanted to understand it and them more. I'd take this to an editor and rework it. Stowe had a fiv...
Ok story about a rich New York hardcore business guy driving around the country who stops to help a man running into a burning house and instantly falls in love. Then they wonder who is setting fires all over town.The writing style left me confused for so much of the book, that I often looked back ...
Ridiculously elaborate writing, like that episode of M*A*S*H where Radar learns to write by mail. Story was okay, but I felt really detached from the characters.
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