by Evans Light
This is a short story about a man being punished by his wife for his infidelity. She is a very cruel and effective woman.4 STARS
This story needed another round of edits. Some sentences were horribly broken, some metaphors were way overblown. Did the door to the crawlspace open inward or outward? There seemed to be some confusion in the text about this somewhat important detail. The story itself wasn't bad. Just needed some p...
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