by Xara X. Xanakas
Loved the depiction of the drunk, hungover Zephyr. Worth four stars for that alone.
2.5 StarsCould not connect with the main characters. They were just there, with no insight given as to their motivation. And for me, I really needed the motivation behind the title character's constant drunkenness/hangover. Sorry, but a full on description of vomiting into the toilet does not a good...
Passing over the plot, I like the style (the sex is hot) but no the characters: they are big macho men that act like little girls, yuck!
2.5The Care And Feeding of An AlcoholicXanakas' writing style was this story's saving grace. The story's concept plus the writing style could have made for an excellent reading experience. However, there was something that really, really bothered me.This was a simple story. Zef, the sheriff, and a c...
3.5 starsThis short story is almost great, unfortunately I find Zef's reason to avoid Bobby Joe after one misunderstanding event -- without even trying to listen to Bobby Joe's reason -- as STUPID. He needs more groveling :pBut I wholeheartedly enjoy the set-up. It's fun reading the exchange in inst...
This one looks really good and it comes out on my b-day.. That's gotta be a good sign right?! Right?!?
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