by Mandy Beyers
Good premise but I felt there was issues with delivery.
Super short story, but still managed to tell a complete story. I agree that the mystery wasn't very mysterious, but I think Ms. Beyers did an admirable job given the length of the piece.I also agree that I'd love to read more of these two!
Sweet & sexy with a little bit of action at the end.An enjoyable story, I just wish there was more!
While I appreciate the effort that goes into writing a story, sadly this one did not work for me. Too much telling and not enough showing left me feeling unattached to the MCs.
3.5 stars. A little quick, but didn't really feel like it was missing anything.
The prompt picture?
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