This is a fairly decent sci-fi / horror short.The author does a good job capturing the atmosphere of the derelict ship and does put together a scary scenario.I don't usually comment on grammatical or spelling errors unless they impact the overall story. But, as they have been addressed by others, I ...
Not a bad story or storytelling, but not my cup of tea either. At first I couldn't stop turning the pages but in the end I simply lost interest and when it's a short story, that's not a good thing.
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