Not that bad for a free short story.
Room mates to lovers. Sweet.
Cute. Sweet. But really sudden and mostly unbelievable. Again, I know it's difficult to do in a short story, but I didn't connect with either of the boys, so I didn't understand the motivations behind their sudden choices. Unless I'm to dumb this down and assume all the motivation college freshman b...
Another m/m short story. This one felt a little rushed, but we got the full gist of where it was going by the end of it. I thought we needed more of their respective "I've been living with this guy for two months and really want to jump his bones" POVs. Note: This short story can be found as part of...
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