I don't usually get prickly about the occasional grammatical error or typo in a story; however this narrative is littered with blatant mistakes. The syntax was a train wreck, and I found the prose extremely cumbersome. The multiple errors were very distracting, taking me out of the story. Examples:...
Somewhere between 2.5 and 3.5 stars. While it was pretty well written, IMO, I was never really sucked in....I actually put it down a few times before I actually finished it. Having said that, I did like her writing style, with both the H and h's pov's, so I think I'll probably giver her other titles...
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