by Vic Winter
Uhhhhhhh, so I thought the premise was pretty awesome & I think it definitely could have gone interesting places. I just think there was too much plot crammed into such a short amount of pages. If there had been zero sex and more development, maybe this would have worked? I don't know, but that endi...
$1.99 here, 15 pages
3.5*This one could have been great, I think it could have been a favorite , but it was just way way too short.I knew it was short when I bought it, but the backstory would be excellent , what did Dobbs go through? Why was he taken? How long was he gone? And then seeing more of how Bruce and he becom...
Beautiful and sweet short story about a guy who was kidnapped and the military guy who helped rescue him and how they meet again. I wish this could have been full length - so much potential.
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