Too twee a good book should have angst and a good antagonist neither of which was in this book. Generally good writing but from a good idea it degenerated in to a boring déjà vue story with no real bite.
This was a nice HEA. It brought tears to my eyes in a few areas and raised my eyebrows in others... But, it didn't flow well. Much of the book feels forced, or out of sync. Honestly, I don't know what, if anything, could be done to fix that. The story moved at a reasonable pace, the characters were ...
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