Good story, but wacky timelines threw me out several times: in May two years later, Terry was watching Adrian play hockey. NHL hockey. In May?? Then after that it was spring, and the playoffs, and then it was finally summer and off-season.Also, while I was fairly caught up through most of the story,...
Meh m/m romance about a young guy who gets together with a pro hockey player in town for the summer. I still haven't recovered from sorting out all the unclear pronoun references.
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